All Comments on 'Order of the Shattered Cross: Pt. 03'

Wow! Wild chapter.

5

More fast please

Excellent chapter. Plenty of revelations and clearly more to come. You built the suspense right up to the end, without using a cliffhanger. Kudos and style points.

Who’d have ever thought of having a character born in Eden? I’m wondering how the original Lilith transferred her immortality to her 444th and last daughter; then that daughter died giving existence to Timothy’s passenger. How could she die if immortal?

Looking forward to more.

Great chapter! Waiting for more.

Simply Wonderful! I can’t wait for more! Soon please!

With no physical form her soul was immortal but denied the sanctity of heaven so she wandered until she found a very interesting fractured to ride for a time.

That and totally loving this story so glsd you're sharing it with us!!!

Wow to the story! Also, loved the Frost analysis.

Any updates on the next chapter? Patiently waiting!

Just found this story and it's kept me up way too late tonight finishing it. Absolutely fascinating world and story. I deeply hope more is coming!

Excellent! Want more….soon.

Fantastic storey. Read three chapters. What a world, lots of planning & research to create these characters. Loving it.

This one should be in the Hall of Fame. Well Done!

Breathtakingly good! 5⭐️