All Comments on 'Order of the Shattered Cross: Pt. 03'

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PurplefizzPurplefizzabout 2 months ago

Breathtakingly good! 5⭐️

1Sam20231Sam20238 months ago

This one should be in the Hall of Fame. Well Done!

sirwoodcuttersirwoodcutter9 months ago

Fantastic storey. Read three chapters. What a world, lots of planning & research to create these characters. Loving it.

Rob0411Rob041110 months ago

Excellent! Want more….soon.

nubbinznubbinz11 months ago

Just found this story and it's kept me up way too late tonight finishing it. Absolutely fascinating world and story. I deeply hope more is coming!

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Any updates on the next chapter? Patiently waiting!

ArtemisjbArtemisjbabout 1 year ago

Wow to the story! Also, loved the Frost analysis.

mithanialmithanialabout 1 year ago

With no physical form her soul was immortal but denied the sanctity of heaven so she wandered until she found a very interesting fractured to ride for a time.

That and totally loving this story so glsd you're sharing it with us!!!

NjoyreadnNjoyreadnabout 1 year ago

Simply Wonderful! I can’t wait for more! Soon please!

oldmanbill69oldmanbill69about 1 year ago

Great chapter! Waiting for more.

WhoGivesAShitWhoGivesAShitabout 1 year ago

Excellent chapter. Plenty of revelations and clearly more to come. You built the suspense right up to the end, without using a cliffhanger. Kudos and style points.

Who’d have ever thought of having a character born in Eden? I’m wondering how the original Lilith transferred her immortality to her 444th and last daughter; then that daughter died giving existence to Timothy’s passenger. How could she die if immortal?

Looking forward to more.

Xzy89c1Xzy89c1about 1 year ago

More fast please

Boyd PercyBoyd Percyabout 1 year ago

Wow! Wild chapter.

5

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