All Comments on 'Organism Ch. 02'

The story is doing great do the sex parts could use some more work try getting more input of there emotions during and how there bodies feels during physical contact

Yep. Good. 5 stars.

Pretty impressive, ya got skill in writing I’ll admit, I can’t see too much needing to be changed to increase immersion into the world, maybe a bit more sticking to a select few main characters, too much focus on all crew members point’s of view could get incredibly complicated later on in the story, too many viewpoints to remember. Just some feedback, can totally be ignored if you want.

Just an fyi on the science: if it was a non-oxygen based atmosphere then combustion of the methane wouldn't have been an issue. And carbon dating only works reliably on terrestrial organic matter up to 50,000 years old. Minor gripes aside this is pretty interesting