All Comments on 'Orgasm Racing'

by cherryontop1973

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
hmm

I did like this story, but the editing mistakes got in the way.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Great story!

Very sexy, love your writing style.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Great

This is but a teaser, but oh what a tease it is...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
NEEDS AN EDITOR

Hot story, but I found myself stumbling over the ill-placed commas and strange word order. Made it lack fluidity as I had to go back and re-read some sentences in order for them to make any sense.

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