All Comments on 'Orgasmotron: First Deployment Ch. 02'

Fab writing! Can't wait for more... and by the way your sense of humor absolutely rocks!

You have set the story up well, hot and the promise of great chapters to come is there. Thonly thing is the length of your chapters. The best length for chapters is 5-12 lines. A few more sentences is fine to keep a thought/image together.

Waiting for the next chapter.

very interesting