All Comments on 'Orientation Day 01'

I reviewed this tale in the New Story Reviews in the Author's Hangout of the Lit Forums

i dont know if its wrong category or not, but if she is making love to another woman and her husband doesnt approve, then she is CHEATING. curious to see what happens in upcoming chapters

Safe sane consensual. If the husband did not agree beforehand it is cheating. Female to female doesnt matter, forsaking all others does. She has betrayed her spouse and her marriage, so be it.

If this is first story or not, it is a very well written erotic story about what sure appears to be lesbian relationship. If I had to vote, I would put it in the lesbian category not the loving wives category, but it's your story, so, obviously, you put it where you want. Still very skillfully written.

the Ct. Yankee

who cares what category its in, here are two babes going down while their hubbies are prob at home slapping their monkeys while reading porn stories...btw, what's your wife doing?