All Comments on 'Original Sin Ch. 04'

Please continue this story! I can't wait for the next update!

i love where this story is going keep it going because i am a dedicated reader your style is fantastic!!

I was thrilled to see chapter 4, but now I'm obsessed to see chapter 5!! you have me so hooked with your writing and it's so hot

OH.MY.GODOH.MY.GOD.OH.MY.GOD.OH.MY.GOD.OH.MY.GOD.OH.MY.GOD.OH.MY.GOD.OH.MY.GOD.OH.MY.GOD.OH.MY.GOD.OH.MY.GOD.OH.MY.GOD.

You are fantastic, brilliant, amazing, the list goes on and on. I NEED THE NEXT CHAPTER. Please don't wait too long!

amazing amazing amazing....god this story is killing me....but i love it so much....damn i wish he would just find out that she didn't do it....please,PLEASE keep writing more!!!!

This was great! I'm dying for another chapter---and soon : )

what a great story, keep it coming, but pleeeeeeeaze make it a happy ending

I loved the story. It is really well writen, smooth and intense, but... I do not like the ending. So, pleeeeeeeese, write a chapter 05. If you can not make a happy ending then at least leave it open...

I can not wait anymore!!! I'm trying whit yoga!! this is by far the best story on this website. Thank you so so much

super writing but its been ages since your last post, dont leave us hanging!!!! PLEASE PLEASE POST SOON.

simply grt...just cant wait to read frthr...please write soon.

please please waiting for chapter 5. loving your style of writing

Your story is brilliant one of the best on Literotica, please write Chapter 5 very soon!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE US I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT WIL HAPPEN THIS IS THE BEST STORY ON THIS SITE AND PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER STORY I LOVE YOUR WRITING SKILLS

damon is an unbelievable asshole and i want him to die!

I really do love this story... But around part 1 of this chapter it started to sound like a soap opera where there's all this unbelievable things that most likely wouldn't happen to one person.. Damn I hate soap operas.. But yea.. The fact that there's 2 women conspiring against her makes me want to go crazy! Well I can only hope it comes back to bite them in the butt and everything goes well for catherine in the end... But I do love your writing though ;)

One out of five again. I hope that Damon blows his own brains out when he finally learns the truth.