All Comments on 'Orphan Ch. 04'

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I can't wait to read the next instalment! I'm really enjoying this series. Thank you!

oh shooo. i like willow, she's wise. i understand the pain her father is feeling, but he shouldn't push jenabel, knowing her temper he should be the wise one. but at least we have sophie being the smart one.

curious how that BBQ get together is going to turn out. maybe a few fireworks, specially between sophie and carl when he finds out it was sophie who invited him.

and yeah there has got to be more about alexander, him being an orphan can very well mean, he was raised a human but thus "blocking" his true nature. now being close to such a sacred place his dormant genes are waking up. just confused why they don't pick that up tho. will have to see how this all evolves now.

I like Willow. She seems to have an insight like most children have. I do she is right about him being one of them.

The party will be very interesting indeed.

this was a great chapter it is going to be a very interesting party please post soon

SUCK... no really you do?

why you ask? because the time in-between the chapters of this fricking excellent story is a kill-joy!

WWWWWAAAAANNNNNTTTT MOOOOAAAARRRR FAAASSSTTTRRRR

really however, such a good story that I am giddy for the next chapter, I REALLY am "chomping at the bit" for more from you...

There is something about this story, which captivates me. i can feel the emotional turmoil. Willow is a joy.I love the interaction between Willow and Alexander.

Fantastic Chapter.Can't wait for the party. Post soon please.

There's not much to say besides this is one of the best stories on this site in any of the categories so far. It's a shame there is so much wait time but after a few paragraphs it usually all comes back to me and I seem to read it much faster then I want to. I want it to last longer and I usually have a short attention span. Great job.

One of the best! Give us a break and speed it up...please.

I wish the next stories came quicker! Love them !

four chapters in, we are still getting to the basics of what everyone is, and how they interact, great story hope to see more soon

The next one can't fast enough as far as I'm concerned.

I'm so glad they're finally going to meet. Bring on the next chapter!

I don't often comment but great story!

I loveeee this story. I'm ready for ch. 5

Excellent work!

Can't wait for the next chapter... The suspense is killing me!!!!!

This story flows well and you can feel the characters as they develop. I am looking forward to your future chapters, very much. Very well done!

I love the characters...and the building tension. Can't wait to see what happens next!

I have never left a comment before, for ANY author, but in this case I felt i had to! this is an amazing story so far, and while i usually just give up on a story if it is not 'finished', for THIS one i will be waiting impatiently and checking back VERY often for updates and more chapters! and in the mean time i think I will go back and read ALL your other stories! PLEASE HURRY WITH MORE OF THIS STORY!

thanx for your time and effort!

Orphan is the best story I've read in many years. Has the author published any of his/her stories in any other publication? He/she is a major talent. Please continue writing.

Thank you for sharing your gift. I hope it will never be complete - or end.

Others who share your passion are humbled.

3 Stories........UNFINISHED.........wu-wu-wuhoppin ??

Imagine if Leonardo didn't finish the nose on the

Mona Lisa.

Hmmm, oh well, c'est le vie, eh ?

Please finish these 3 before starting a 4th...thanks.

I love this story. The pacing is killing me though. I'm particularly moved by the hero's story. How long will you make Jenabel suffer?????????????

But the teasing is driving me wild LOL!

Great set of characters and lovely location too. Off to read the next offering :-)

I'll bet there is an impatient person in your life that has helped you cultivate your methods for teasing. I've literally read and rated the first 4 chapters in a half hour. Of course I love the series... can we get to the meet and greet already? Oh, thank you for sharing these characters with us. I hope to read more about Willow. I have a wiley little neice that reminds me of a younger Willow.

crafted by a story teller for curious readers.

thank you

You have crafted a wonderful tale, and I cannot wait to read the rest. Fortunately, I have the remainder of the story to go, without the wait between chapters (unless you are going beyond 10).

JC the Continuer said if he got enough people wanting this continued he would start it back up.