All Comments on 'Orphan Ch. 10'

Can't wait until Bouchard gets his furry ass handed to him :) Beyond the impatience, though, I'm loving the pace of this even if I can totally sympathize with poor Alexander and Jenabel. They're gonna be bonkers by the time the full moon gets here. lol

loved the way you are torturing alexander and Jenabel with all of the tension once them two do mate look out. and now i have to wonder how the little war is going to turn out. terrific chapter looking forward to the next one

The Bouchards are going to get smeared by Alex. More soon please!

Always so cranky!

They send in the cannon fodder and then get pissed when they're killed.

Got to love them

always a joy to see it go live!! big fat 6 if that were possible

I don't think a vat of ice will help those two. How are they going to make it nine more days? Then again, I think the Rouge Alpha and his pack are going to give them something else to be thinking about.

I await the next chapter.

Wish there were more stars to give this story . . .

I want to see Alexander in 100% uncontrolled feral wolf, should be soon if that other pack is coming.

is it possible that alexander and sophie are dreaming about the same thing , just from different prospective's and i think that alex may be quite more than what he seems, and that is what Dmitri is going to inform them of

cant wait for the next chapter.. this is one of my favorite stories.....this next chapter should be intresting. cant wait t see what he does and how they react....

Could Alexander be the son of Thomas Bouchard's sister, who he was thinking of a few chapters back? Is it possible that they are related? I wonder how that would affect the crazed alpha?

I am not sure how I can answer you as you sent your question as anonymous so I can not even reply to you. Common sense would dictate that if you want a serious answer that you would at least provide a means of reply. Having said that, I eagerly await your next email so that I can reply. thanks, Kate

Absolutley one of my favorites am rereading it and enjoying it even more please keep up the good work

I love this story. I just wish you were able to post more frequently, but I am grateful for what you are able to post :)

The next chapter can't come soon enough.

judging by previous upload dates id guess another week and a half before next chapter unless something gets in the way, loved the chapter cant agree more with cantfightfate it definately cant get here fast enough

I love the way you build up the tension in your stories. Always keeping me on the edge of my seat.

great story , when is the next Ch. coming out?

This is absolutely an amasing story, I hope you will hurry with a new chapter :)

As far as I can remember this is a good story, But in just a few more days I will begin to forget what was happening and which Dane is the protagonist in this one.

V - need a fix plz write more soon!

Absolutely fantastic story so far!

More please........

I agree with the others, we need more soon please.

Need next chapter soon!!!

moooooore...........

This is a great story so far. I know, like the others, I'm waiting for the next chapters.

cant wait for next chapter

Why you appear to have abandoned this story?

Looking forward to the next chapter.

new chapter plz!!!!!

Please continue! This is one of my favorite series on lit!

Please continue this I fell in love with theseh characters.

I hope you are not another one of those asshole writers that leave the story unfinished.this is a great story but dont leave us with our thoungs hanging out.

I don't get authors these days. How can you have so little respect for your readers?

I am hoping for writers block and not what everyone else is thinking. Please come back soon. This is the best story and I would hate to see it unfinished.

too bad the shitty stories don't get discontinued. It always seems to be the best stories get left behind. I'll keep checking up on this one although my intuition is generally correct about lit stories. This one will probably not be continued. It sucks too because I knew there was no way this one was going to finish when I hit the 6th chapter but I kept reading anyways. I need to stop doing that! Thanks for the read, could have been the best ever. Hope I'm wrong not just for myself but also for your other dedicated fans and you finish this gem.

Hope to see you return to this story. It is highly enjoyable and engrossing.

Its an excellent story... waiting eagerly for the next chapters.. :)

Time for the ego pack to finally know it place and for Alexander to meet Cross. Please continue!

I am beginning to wonder if something has happened to the author, has anyone heard anything? 7 months so far without an update. Seems like a couple of my favorites has disappeared.

Based off the author's twitter account it seems they started writing again in late April, so there is hope.

I just love how this is going, please don't keep us in suspence to long.

After such a long hiatus, without so much as a word to rapt fans, I really don't have that much faith that this will ever be finished. Just a simple "I'm not well," "my muse has dried up" or even "I just don't feel like writing right now" would suffice. When they say nothing, I assume that they will continue to write nothing. Since that tweet went out in April, and it is nearly July, I have even less hope that the author will honor our pact to read, to critique and to encourage as long as the author produces a decent work and finishes that work. If Vjax does manage to finish, I don't think I will get caught up in any more compelling characters until these stories have "the end" tacked on.

I am very frustrated with authors that don't finish their stories.

Ugghh another unfinished story??!! so do I even attempt anymore from this writer or will I be left hanging again? pity too I enjoyed this story way more than the Dragon clan one. I even stayed up late to finish it or at least the chapters that have been posted. deeply disappointed

Sad that another good series isn't finished. =(

Driving me crazy. Please finish the story. I keep looking for updates.

I agree with the other comments I am also sick of authors that never finish a story. I really loved this story and now am seriously pissed that it is not going to have an ending.

I have to agree with the previous comments far too many well written excellent stories left unfinished

When will you finish this......????

Please finish this your a good author and writer thanks *Jade*

Really don't get all the drama with the mating now that he can shift. He just needs to screw her in human form,bite her and she him, then shift and rut as wolves bite each other again where is the stress in that.

Chapters ago you said there would be 20 chapters to this story! Well we are half way there. SO where is the rest?

Finish or delete it's not right to leavr people hanging

Maybe you should follow Robcub32's example he finishes his story before he starts to post the chapters that way his fans are never let down and left without an ending!!!!!

Cant wait til you post the next chapter so far its great

You can't just leave us hanging like this

More More I need to read more just don't leave us hanging. I need to know whats going to happen next, do they find cross, alex's parents don't keep waiting long looking forward to more.

For the next installment!

good story, good characters. a little too much multiple viewpoints of the same event.

great work, now we just need an ending

I think we will have to wait for the anniversary on this one. Like some of the other comments I too wonder why the bad stories reach an end and the good ones just die.

Anyway...Alexander will take over the Bouchard Pack when this is ever done.

It's so sad to see a great story hit a road block. I hope you can continue this real soon. Good luck in finding your writing groove again.

DracosBaby

i check this every day about.. this is by far my most favorite story... i only wish you would finish it... so much could still happen and i want to read how it unfolds.. please dont let it die like the other stories

You ever get the feeling someone goes around taking out other good writers? I think it is Jazz so that we have something other then her cliffhangers to complain about. LOL

Three wonderful stories from you. But yet again, this is the 3rd successive incomplete. Don't expect much of an interest from your readers if you even think about putting out a fourth story without finishing the other three. I had you on my list of fav authors, but I think it's time to move on and remove your name from that list. That said though, the best of luck to you in whatever you decide to do next. Hopefully, it's to finish one of your stories...

Seriously when are you gonna finish the orphan story? Would love to find out what happens but can't because you haven't finished it yet.

Seriously its been over a year now since the last chapter. Will there be anymore to come? I sure hope so, please finish this story. Still wana know what happens to the characters.

Okay I am a big fan of these kinds of stories. But you are dragging it out way too far. I love the suspense in stories like this but this one is kind of irritating waiting for you to finish. So how about you do us all a favor and get your head out of your ass and finish the damn thing already! There is only a very few readers on this website I believe that can put up with so much suspense. So far I will give this a 3 and a half star rating in my note book of stories that I like on this website. Just hurry up and finish so I can find out what the hell happens and it better be a happy ending that's for damn sure!

Come on write some more of story

please keep writing more chapters , this story is really good

Are you ever going to finish this story?

Please finish

i guess the writer has died or something

I WISH U WELL IN UR WRITING CANT WAIT TO SEE THIS FINISHED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

come on write the rest

I just read the whole story in a few hours cant wait for more

I have enjoyed this but you need to finish it please???????????

Please finish. If you write on some other site please update your profile. Your characters are in grossing. You need to write an ending.

Marvelous story! Bdst of the type. Please continue.

You have to finish this story....Come back!!! Greatest story ever!!!

i guess the author is done since it has been over a year since any update too bad

More Please, it would be shame to waste the excellent character development.

Great story no flaws you are a great writer pppllleeeaaassseee mmmooorrreee I want so much more this story is so deliciouse alexander and jenabel are beautiful characters can't wait to see the rest.

more?

Awesome story. It has had me enchanted from the moment I started reading it. Hope the next chapter is coming soon.

You should write a book more detailed about the were's and their adventures.

where's the next chapter

write somemore

Talk about a great letdown,,,,reading 10 chapters till 4 in the morning,,,to have NOTHING,,,,i know there wont be anymore as it was over 2 years ago this was posted,,,but dang it,,,why start and not finish,,,its becoming the normal on here,,,more unfinished stories and wasted time for readers,,,,,and was a great story line,,,,really sucks,,,

Please write more, I have been waiting so long to see what happens next, I keep rereading it but I need more!

Why do I keep re reading this awesome story when I know when I get to the end of this chapter that I will be so disappointed that it was left unfinished! I am so tired of stories with no end. Here it is August 2013 and still nothing. :(

Ok Vjax, lets keep the ball rolling. This story is good enough to be made into a mini-series.

The author has taken the werewolf theme and used it to give new life to the genre. It is a masterpiece. The author has shown, what I believe to be, a new side to the tired out horror theme, but instead reveals the characters in a new and different light. By far this is one of the best Werewolf stories I have read. The only thing missing from this story is the next installment of chapters. Keep writing and forging onward to complete the story.

What a pity, this story is one of the best werewolf romance stories I've ever read...

Dear author, if you are still alive, PLEASE continue writing!!!!!

Please continue this story...

Why the HECK wud u write such a great story and just leave it hanging?? Cmon man, we're dying for more.....

come on i like this Story please write some more

the author died sadly we must grieve in the loss of the talent.

nah just bullshitting. thought if i wrote that we would get a response

EVERY one listed in the Similar Stories section on the right of screen are unfinished with no sigh that the authors will ever return...So, similar in more than one way huh! Sigh so annoying when great stories don't get finished but that seems to be par for the course here on lit.