All Comments on 'Our Beginning... Ch. 02'

Wow! It's so sexy how she takes control of her daddy and fucks him herself! The element of "let's-not-wake-the-whole-house" added to the excitement... If you do a sequel, consider sub/Dom, I think that would add some "spice" Great job!

Hot in the extreme. Butterfly's daddy has a true present waitng for him...

oh so hot, a real turn on for me

How exquisite! Getting your lights fucked out and somehow restraining the overwhelming impulse to scream your lungs out.

Just incredible. I think I hurt myself. LOL! Great story. It begs for a third chapter.

a good story and very well told. i found it to be a real turn on

This is a great story, one of the best I've read. Surreal and intense.I bet you write great non-erotica as well.

This is a great story, one of the best I've read. Surreal and intense.I bet you write great non-erotica as well.

Wow you capturedmy fantasy except i am Dad

This was lovely!

Wish you had more...

The story is exactly what I want my daddy to do to me. I'm 26, dad rick is 47 I want to seduce him and make him cum inside me just like in your story. I'm stacy18 _bi@hotmail if you want to hit me up