All Comments on 'Our Family Pt. 01'

Personally I'm supportive but straight, so didn't like reading the M/M sequence, but otherwise I hope the story continues.

I write this in hope it helps your future output. A good story needs a setup, transition and a payoff. A conflict is essential to add tension. Having the son approach his father in the manner you did meant there was no realism to your story.

My family is going to be like this