All Comments on 'Our Family's Cabin'

I see so many possibilities here. Great start for a first story. Keep up the good work.

5 stars. Keep writing please. Well written. Descriptive. Hope to see either a follow up (continuation) to this story, or other stories.

Lovely story! I can wait to see where it goes from here. Hopefully all the women get involved and even have some sex among themselves.

The dominance bullshit was unnecessary to the story. Otherwise a 5

Great start!

Thank you both for the feedback! I’ve already began part 2 and have some overarching goals of where I want to go in the long run. I appreciate any and all feedback positive or constructive.

That was hot! 5/5, please continue!

Great start. 5*…so many possibilities. The nieces could be next.

This is a really great start, and I have to agree with the others and recommend involving all the ladies.5 of 5

Is it really so hard to put a "Ch. 01" in the title, if the story is not complete?

The story itself was quite good, though the dom/sub stuff doesn't personally float my boat, pun intended.

"WOW"! This is so good, I would not presume to suggest anything for fear I would miss something really good from your twisted mind!!! Next installment please!

Really well told story but the underlying premise just doesn't make sense. His wife at a very young age, early in their marriage has supposedly lost interest in sex. However, if he is playing with other women, then her libido comes rushing back? I just can't wrap my brain around it, so I struggle to get involved in your world beyond the sex itself. 4*

nice...Real NICE...please keep rolling with this!!

Reality is opposite of this story...

Nice fantasy though...

3 stars 'cuz it stimulated me some.