by jehoram
(Usual disclaimer: I edited this story. All errata are my fault.)
I liked this story and the whole series a lot. I was going to write it off as a male fantasy but, with the addition of Rosie, it became something more. It's often a woman's fantasy to be had by a quick succession of men. It's usually a rape or a gang-bang situation, not one involving a loving family. That was new to me. And it was my fantasy, too, although I was wishing for the family I wished I had, not the one I actually had.
I just found OFLS Ch.4, really liked it, and then went back and caught up on the first 3 chapters. It is a great story and hope that you continue to write more chapters about Jeremy and his family. Five Stars from me, and a big thank you. Hope to see more full family stories from you in the future. Keep them coming!
DNA
A great addition to the series. Very hot sex in all four chapters!!
It was a little over the top, but still enjoyable. How about more chapters with fewer characters, and maybe the guys helping each other slide into the girls pussies?