All Comments on 'Our First Date [M30/F26]'

by NicheChimaera

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Naughty_BitsNaughty_Bitsover 1 year ago

The only critique I have is that it's "lungs" not "longues", otherwise this was a delight

MaydaypilotMaydaypilotover 1 year ago

Hot as fuck! Very well written. Your writing style matches the protagonist’s urgency perfectly. Amazing for a first story. Now, more.

AliceinLiitlandAliceinLiitlandover 1 year ago

This story was amazing! Great writing, I can't wait to read more xxx

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Writing and kinky stuff are both a bit of a hobby. Why not combine them? Call me Niche, Chim or Chimaera. I'll answer to all, as long as you call me.