All Comments on 'Our First Time'

by Meka

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Cheating

Doesn't do it for me, no thanks but good writing. Can't believe she acts this way with her husband, if she did she wouldn't need to cheat.

Speedrayser74Speedrayser74over 14 years ago
Well written...

You narrative was excellent. Good use of language... read as more than just a "cheap thrill". I look forward to your next piece.

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