All Comments on 'Our Journey Ch. 01'

That's a real adventure all right. The wanna be cuck is thrilled to see his wife become a whore and make his dreams come true. Welcome another new cuck author to join the 6,456 already in LW.

maybe I will read it later. Please use TAGS so Iknow if I should read or not.

Almost quite good.

Where the wife goes from prude to whore in one day. Couldn’t you make it even slightly more original?

Very exciting! Can’t wait to hear about your wife enjoying another man some day!z

Nice story, hope there is more to cum. Thanks.

Maddies last married adventure, results in divorce.

Cool story. I love seeing Cass flirt and tease but it would be amazing to hear about or watch her fuck someone else :-)

From prude to whore in one day. Really? If you can't think of anything to write, don't fucking do it.

This is a perfect type of story for the LW category. Thanks for writing.

Please work on things like missing verbs and pronouns in the middle of sentences. It makes the reader guess what you meant and stops the flow of the story in their mind while they are doing your writing for you.

Keep writing .... Keep improving.

Great story because it seems real. This is close to my story and the start of being a hot wife husband. 👍😀

Good start. I like a slow build. The reluctant hot milfs that eventually give in to lust and realize they've always needed something more

Totally relate. Hope to share your story with my wife as she will be traveling tomorrow for a week.