All Comments on 'Our Little Secret Ch. 09'

by deltablonde

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Thank you for sharing

Really enjoying you're story and look forward to seeing more :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Everyone seems interested in three girls who stripped on a bar.

Which is unusual considering how often that happens. Have you ever seen a Girls Gone Wild? Spring Break or Mardi Gras or hell, just a typical Saturday night? There is way too much interest in a fairly common occurrence to justify your story.

The perpetrator is locked up for life after being framed with child porn, when Joel raped two young women and defrauded however many others. It's just stupid and it's very disappointing how this playing out.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Great story

Really enjoying the tale. Best story on literotica. A little sex and a real story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Great Story

The story is well thought out and very enjoyable to read. I keep looking forward to the next chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

This story is getting better, as the author settles into the idea. I liked it from the beginning, but as it is refined it gets even better.

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