by MrIllusion
I found the story to be unbelievable/unlikely. I realize that most of the stories here are fictional, but unless it is a sci-fi work, it just seems better if it is believable.
The way everyone just jumped in without argument or discussion....yeah....
The errors I noticed in the writing weren't grammatical, they were probably typos. Would have been caught by a proofreader.
Bottom line, a good story, albeit a bit unbelievable. Thanks, keep it going.
Granted there was some errors, and this whole unrealistic thing: based on what? I have fucked many single and not single moms in this world, and the amount that admitted they thought and would do their kids is higher than you think. So how unrealistic do you think this is? Oh and this includes moms I met on here: unfortunately I didn't fuck.
That aside, I personally like this story but you also did hit a few of my biggest turn-ons:
Yoga
Yoga outfits especially second skin yoga pants
Mom & Son incest
I gave it 4x's
My cock was so hard.
Do you have any more amazing Yoga teachers
Great story had my cock rock hard the whole time. Would love if you would continue this story line.
This was really good, you should make another story with these characters
Wow!! Great story.. so well written... a great pace! Def need a sequel!!! I really enjoy it!!! Thank you
Add a part two with a strap on, using that to give mom and daughter a dp expierence.
5 stars is not enough!!!! A fantasy like no other!!! Please consider adding to this, it was awesome!
I gotta agree with Anonymous.
This story is unrealistic. The way they just jump into incest so willingly. Going so far as to include the sister in it without a second thought. No hesitation or reluctance from anyone. It's odd.
And anyone who is so willing to commit incest without guilt and without hesitation is a sick person. The lustful son thing is unrealistic, but forgivable. It's not shocking that a man would be more willing to jump into sex with any woman. But the mom and the sister diving into incest out of the blue like that? With no guilt or anything? That really shows the unrealistic nature of the story.
The unrealistic elements of this story kills the enjoyment. And so does the unrealistic dialogue, which is pretty bad too. Much of it is cliché and reeks of dialogue you'll hear in an incest porn video.
The lack of believable buildup to the incestuous sex and the bad dialogue ruins the story for me. If there had been improved dialogue and more reluctance in all three characters, I would've enjoyed it.
Loved it. Great story. Easy read. Awesome fantasy. Don't understand the haters going on about it "not being realistic".....lol. Unless you have been in the exact position, with the years of build up etc....then you can't moan about it. As with 99% of stories on here, they are fantasy and escapism....stop over analysing