All Comments on 'Our New In-Laws Ch. 02'

ProWriter didn't like my comment on the 1st chapter but that's OK. Our author echoes my sentiment in this one by the hero "Allison, I think, is seduced by the money made by your business." Whether this is hypocritical or not remains to be seen. Entitled to my opinion as much as PW is his. Money does not necessarily demand respect, nor does his daughter's choices of husband or in-laws.

A story like this showing the gradual seduction of several people is really hot. As a request - don't rush it. Building up really makes this type of story noteworthy. This could be very good. Great start.