All Comments on 'Our Private Little Cove Ch. 03'

had access to the server that the backup of the home security system was held on. So there is now UHD media of the sexapaids .

Gotta proof read

Good story but it seems like youre rushing it a bit

I have to agree with the comments below. This chapter started out on the right track but then seemed to become rushed. Suspect that could also be why there was even more grammar errors & typos than last time even though it was a much shorter chapter.

Slow down, re-read often, get someone else to proof read and then submit it. That should turn a good story into a great one :)

Please don't be put off by these comments - I (and I hope other readers) want to help the authors who are kind enough to share their work to improve so we all have great stories to read and enjoy.