All Comments on 'Our Private Little Cove Ch. 06'

It was fun until you fucked it up.... please stop now.

You are doing fine. Don't listen to the negativity.

Hi,

I know you commented somewhere along about spelling errors, etc. That's not too bad for reading, as I can follow and mentally make corrections. What I have a problem with is this woman's name...... as written in the earliest parts, 'Cloe' but shortly after it becomes 'Chole', which blows my mind! The normal spelling of 'Chloe' is that, and when names are repeated throughout with an odd spelling, it really diverts the attention, sticking out prominently. I like the fantasy of the story and that whole thing, but some attention to this minor detail would help with smoother reading. Keep up the work and please consider this a positive criticism. Thanks

Your story should be in the fiction section.

Secondly, get a spell checker app.