All Comments on 'Our Secret Thanksgiving'

The generational aspect of the story is enjoyable to me.

I thought it progressed a little too quickly. This was meant to be a strictly jerk-off piece. I did not leave the usual pictured scene as a tease, nor did it create excitement for the reader. Maybe the author can do better with the next story submitted

When you focused on their interactions, that was good with a nice blend of sex and intimacy. However, there wasn't much of that. Those scenes could have been twice as long. Please keep to one perspective; when you switch back and forth, it's jarring. Nice effort. 4*

The story is good, the sex is good, but the changes from 1st to 3rd person and back and forth really detract.