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Click hereBoros was shocked at what happened. He had the base of Shihinds neck locked in his powerful jaws. His tongue came alive with the different tastes, her salty sweat, the sweet metallic flavor of her blood, and something else that was bitter. His testicles tightened again and another almost painful burst of semen surged up through his shaft. Boros held Shihongs limp body to him as he thrust wave after wave of cum into her. Energy was flowing from him into her, intensifying, and then flowing back into him until the two of them should have been glowing with the power. The cycle seemed to go on forever until, on the tail of his flagging orgasm, he felt a vastly enormous presence brush against his mind. Just that barest touch completely overwhelmed his consciousness. He fell over on the bed, pulling Shihong with him, as he fell deeper into his own mind than he knew was possible.
- COMMENTS
taustabout 4 years agoI have finally got around to registering an account and re-reading some of my favorite stories from literotica. There was so much potential with this series and I hope one day you are inspired to write some more.
Malkeusover 5 years agoThis is like endangered 2777. I really like the idea of supernatural beings meeting aliens. 5 stars, please continue. Ignore snarky entitled anon's like the one below.
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoSo i take it your not going to finish the story. I have been waiting for the next chapter sense you first posted the last one and going off of that was almost a year ago and still nothing im going to say you just gave up. What a shame because it was turning into one of the best on here. Oh well happens all the time unfortunately. Just saying if your not going to finish it why even post the first three chapters to begine with
Anonymousabout 6 years agoYou're story is amazing and I think it's one of the best ones on this site. I hope you can finish it someday.
TangentFoxover 6 years agoAbsolutely amazing! Minor typos here and there, but I've loved reading up till here. I just wish there was more. What happened? :/
I especially loved the creativity in .. I don't even know where to start, it feels so much like reality yet in the future without shoving your face in it constantly. Wish I knew more of the background, but (assuming it is continued) I'm sure that would be figured out as time goes on.
Gregorius_Lightmouthover 6 years agoHe updated his biography, which means he isn't gone😁
Anonymousalmost 7 years agosad really... but happens all to often n seems llike always to great premises
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoIf ever the pause grows too long... meditate.
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoPlease consider a proofreader, or better, an editor. Your star cruiser morphed from an impressive 1.5 kilometers in length to measuring 750 kilometers (New York City to Washington D.C.-- and back!), just from the bridge to the bow. Given that the bridge is normally in the front one-third of the vessel, the implication is that the ship would stretch from New York City to Miami... and they had it in a hanger!
There were other, similar problems. Boros' choosing to shred the clothes of the naked girl was problematic at best. There were way too many typos and usage errors-- repeatedly you forgot to capitalize "Boros", and the mess you made of "tumescence" showed you didn't run spell check.
I wouldn't bother mentioning any of this if you weren't such a good story teller. You have what may be a new take on dragons-- which I would have thought impossible-- and the mystery of what sort of preternatural Shihong is helps move the story (I'm betting she's a dragon, too-- possibly red!).
So yes, do keep writing, but please, find an editor. There are people on Literotica that will help. Your story is worth it!
Anonymousalmost 7 years ago1. love your story
2. love the length of the chapters
3. love the speed of publishing new chapters
4. you could ask someone to read over your text to eliminate some more typos or such :-)
Thank you, keep going!
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoI know it is easier to be a critic than a writer but I assume you want feedback to help you improve. The character Santos was poorly presented. Boros immediately didn't like him but no reason was given. Santos didn't do anything improper at the beginning and it was Boros that I thought was rude. Santos eventually copped an attitude but it needed to be earlier. It just didn't flow right. The story itself is very entertaining and I look forward to future chapters.
Anonymousalmost 7 years agocheers! also correct ur spacecraft measurements... n try n keep personalities consistent even if they r talking to different people.
