All Comments on 'Ours'

I enjoyed the story alot but I misclicked and put 4 stars instead of 5 I don't know how to change that unfortunately :(

Amazing

Hands down one of the best stories I've read on this site. Your story makes me feel jealous of Jack.

Please keep writing and keep blessing us with your stories. Thank You

I enjoyed most of it. A couple things not so much. I think Sherrie calling him slave all the time was off. Plus, having him beat up 5 guys and having orcs & elves in the story was unnecessary. Lastly, I would have liked it if they ended with a spit-roast, instead of the dble d*ckng. Other than those things a good story.

I may not be into smoking but damn this story is so hot! So many introductions in the later half I hope the next one comes out soon.

Amazing! Amazing story, great characters and immersive universe. Is there another chapter or story in the works? Will you elaborate on Sasha Dimary angle?

WOW, double penetration, I want to try. I love the way you write, please continue.