All Comments on 'Out of Darkness Ch. 04'

by lilgirlsix

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Patrolin_AusPatrolin_Ausover 11 years ago
Hehehehehe

The best 2 words I've seen in this whole story 'Run, Rudolph'.

shanleyboyshanleyboyover 11 years ago
brilliant as always

no further comment needed :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
you write some...

amazing stories.

thank you

*****

trubblemakurtrubblemakurover 11 years ago
the only thing

That would make this story any better is if the chapters were longer. Loving it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Amazing, as always. keep going please!

pleasureseeker5pleasureseeker5over 11 years ago
You've got a knack, lilgirlsix--

for keeping us interested in your stories. Your writing technique has really improved--keep going, we're loving it!

poisedpencilpoisedpencilover 11 years ago
Confused about Orsolya

When did Orsolya come back? Have I missed something? Could someone point me to the chapter when she came back? Thanks

katgoddess1katgoddess1over 11 years ago
To poisedpencil

Orsolya was found by the newly turned panthers in the final chapter, chapter 8, of The Destruction of The Vlkolak.

I am thrilled that the pack finally has some justice for the atrocities against them. It looks like Zsalya has finally found her mate in this lifetime.

fefe428fefe428over 11 years ago
Loving this story...

I'm so glad that this chapter focused back on the Baxter pack and the council. While I do enjoy your stories...I seem to enjoy the parts that the bring us back to where you originally started out the most...back with the characters of the Baxter pack and all the council members. I really can't wait to see how you plan to tie this all together!!!

EuphoriaSlam69EuphoriaSlam69over 11 years ago
lilgirlsix you NEVER disappoint!

You are an incredible writer with such a rapid work rate! I am very much appreciative to the point of loving all your writings! They are so well tied together, yet they stand on their own merits! Well done lil miss! I check often for your updates! Thank you so much! :)

DoctimeDoctimeover 11 years ago
Good read

Your stories need a syllabus to keep track of all the characters! However, I continue to remain enthralled. Obviously your holiday rejuvenated you.

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