All Comments on 'Out of the Blue Ch. 01'

I stopped at "this is a true story". It's a porn site and we all know there's nothing real in porn. No one believes you.

Really, you come on the site to read a dirty story and are put off by the word ‘True’. I don’t think so. What you are saying, is that if I lied and said I had made everything up, you would have read it. That’s plainly stupid. I usually ignore all the ludicrous comments from self righteous Anonimous twits, but just couldn’t let this one go.

Good to see a Kiwi story

"This is a true story. Yes, I have enhanced the sex, invented the dialogue and changed many names."

Then it is not a true story.. lol. That said the story wasn't bad, I would leave that first declaration out as it distracts from the fantasy of it. I'll be looking to see where you take this.