All Comments on 'Out of This World'

by KittyAshleyy

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63lsmith63lsmithabout 5 years ago
A GOOD SHORT STORY

I wonder if there is more to come.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Good

The ending seemed a bit rushed, I wish the actual sex scene would've been longer. But I loved the concept, and it was a good story!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Encore please, more more.

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Hey I'm Ash 23 Non Binary Attempted Writer from the UK This is where the lewd stuff I write goes