All Comments on 'Out on the Street Pt. 02'

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curiousaudreycuriousaudreyover 2 years ago

Hopefully Angelo and Vittorio get together while Frank is gone

verdunsearsverdunsearsover 2 years ago

Lovely cadence to this story - yearning and accepting.

dnsontndnsontnover 2 years ago

I struggled with Frank's voice reading Chapter One. I put it down several times thinking I didn't care to continue. Here, at the end of this chapter, I'm pleased I read the first one through. Vittorio gaining his voice is a complete game changer for me, my enjoyment, my understanding. Outstanding, complex, compelling, Author. Five Stars and looking forward to the TBC.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Your character development is superb. I especially like the subtle and nuanced growth of all three characters.

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