by sjreardon
I struggled with Frank's voice reading Chapter One. I put it down several times thinking I didn't care to continue. Here, at the end of this chapter, I'm pleased I read the first one through. Vittorio gaining his voice is a complete game changer for me, my enjoyment, my understanding. Outstanding, complex, compelling, Author. Five Stars and looking forward to the TBC.
Your character development is superb. I especially like the subtle and nuanced growth of all three characters.