by Mister_Shy
HOT story you HAVE to take further and he has to cum in her and take her ass
We need many more chapters of these two! The earlier comments are right, too -- come in her sweet pussy and in her hot tight ass! Love it!!!!
Great story development; and I agree, he needs to fill up her pussy, (and ass, and her mouth again, and all over her body) with his cum. Lots of it! That last when he dives out the window made me laugh. Inappropriately maybe, but I just found it hilarious. *G* Thanks for a hot series!!
Lol, ok, gotta stop reading this with this chapter, the dude is just too lame! Someone give him a whip so he can flagellate himself while he fucks her then whines that he cant cum in her, lol. I peeked at the beginning of the next chapter, the dude would have been better off letting his wife catch him banging his daughter, both of them denying anything had happened, and getting a divorce out of it. Lol.
Just stop commenting. Your input on this storyline has been lame and unhelpful every step of the way. Unless you're either in a prison cell or on the sex offenders list, none of the things you've been saying seem like good ideas to a healthy minded adult whatsoever. Any sane individual would feel incredibly conflicted about what is happening from the main character's perspective. Stop being a disgusting mouth breather.
" . . . feed me Daddy . . ." Holy shit! Yes developed somewhat slowly. And; yes, the poor bastard SHOULD BE suffering from a terrible guilt of cumflict, BUT, haters, please, don't take away from the fucking visualization that is required on my part, in order for this story to work. In other words, Mister_Shy, pay zero heed to any inkling of what many on this site call "feedback or criticism, [constructive(?) or otherwise]." For, if you do, you will endeavor ever forward. Period. Or as I sometimes say, 'fuck 'em.' Period. Good fucking job.
Katie is the perfect role model for all young girls.
High schools should have a mandatory class for all young girls to learn to swallow cum and pleasure their daddies.