All Comments on 'Outrage! Pt. 04'

Great as always. Thanks for a great story.

it was a good ride and on a whole this was a good series I felt the ending sort of ran out of steam still I am satisfied with it another great story by this writer

Excellent series. You're the greatest soul71! Every story you have written has scored a solid 5 stars. 25 BIG STARS for this one soul.

For going back to some of the stories that's been hanging around. If I remembered correctly, Outrage was the first story authored by you that I read. Thank you for responding to my e-mail. Grouch6977

I enjoyed the story a lot. AAAAAA++++++

Love the series definitely 5 stars but I am only saying 4 for the last chapter as I am not thrilled with the rushed ending.

it was one of the best written stories i have read

Only flaw I saw was Julie's breast size dropped from 36C early in the story to 36B later. LOL! 5* for an entertaining but unbelievable tale.

Can’t wait to possibly see any of these characters show up again in your connected universe

Great work but it seemed a little rushed. And I would have liked to see the revenge on her so called friends and her asshole ex. But it’s still a damn good read!

Is there any images to go with these if so can someone point me in the right direction for a free site please

10/10!!!!!

Excellent series!

My only complaint is that you didn't go into her humiliating her other three friends, making the one she did kind of moot.

(3/9/2022) Nicely done. Perfect ending. Five stars for each chapter. Happy that Nora, Jon, and Julie stayed together. I’d like to imagine them staying loyal to each other and Julie having a couple of kids of her own; with Jon of course.

Good story, I would have liked a better making up between Nora and Julie. Julie obviously had self esteem issues stemming from being compared to her mother. Her father picked up on that to manipulate her, and straight up abused his own daughter. Then after Nora found out she dominated Julie as revenge for hurting her. I would have liked more on Nora's part as she learned the truth of the matter. She should have realized she had treated her daughter the same as her husband, and sought her forgiveness.

Really enjoyed it

Very nice ending, thanks! 5/5

Awesome 5⭐️ series all the way across,,, I loved the ending of it as a wrap up,,, thank you for the beautiful story

I would like to partly agree with NegativeGivity. But the difference is that I would have wanted to see how Julie's relationship with Nora blossoms into something more than just mother/daughter in a sorry of parallel to Nora's relationship with Jon. Also I would like to see how the dynamic shifts as Jon grows into his role as man of the house seeing that both his mother and sister become his wives in a sort of polygamous and polyamorous relationship. I feel there is so much more to this story

I have to say you had me worried for a bit the way you said Jerome eyes lit up when he heard that Nora had a daughter and when you said how Jerome looked at her and not through her like you was going to have them hook up I was disappointed when you had him fuck his teacher and moms former friend but I get why I just feel you should have left it strictly between him his mom and sister

Ok it was a good series for sure but I think if you would have added a little competition for jon you having another guy ve for either his sisters attention or even his moms basically have him get a little jealous over another guy and have him show it clearly would have made it better but non the less it was still a good series without it

Loved the series, but feel it would have been best served to continue it to the conclusion and running crossovers with Myra and Jerome instead of doing the epilog ending. Lots of story left in there to tell.

Ending seemed to be a bit rushed. Almost as though the writer was fed up of writing.

But, still a good story throughout all of the chapters and still worth 5 stars overall.

But I too thought the ending was rushed. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

All these girls complaining about their partners. Why they still with them if they're not satisfying them? That's like complaining the fire is too hot but not taking your hand away from it. Seems like there's an obvious solution that they refuse to acknowledge.

Patrick really is a twisted, self-centred, arrogant piece of shit. Even after getting totally taken to the cleaners (rightfully so), he's still trying to get his daughter's pussy, because she fell for his shit early on. Man this guy needs to be put down... and it seems like he was in the end by an angry husband when caught in the act with said man's wife. Good riddance.

The ending was rather rushed. A bit more detail there would have been nice. I'm sure Julie would have had kids too with her brother. But we'll just have to imagine the rest.