All Comments on 'Outta Control Pt. 09'

Not a bad story . I'd personally like a little more angst but that's me. Keep up the good work. Don't let the criticising bastards get to you. :)

Out of control, A well Written Story

I liked the story,it was a bit long but the content was vary good. The people were real. If you decide to wright another story you can leave out some of the less inportant details...........

This shit does not happen in real life...not even in the hood. Was a good fantasy until you got to the part about it being true...ruined it.

I like reading about young black men and older white women, because a lot of older white women want to fool around with young black guys. They want to see if it's true about dick size and fucking ability. So the author of this story should continue to write about mother-in -laws with son-in laws, that's a real hot topic.

Actually you interatial writing sucks. And ur nit a good auther. He'll ur nit even top 10. So I can't belive u had the nerves t wrte that story. I can tell u why the story and the real life choce, if it happened the way it did , was stupid. First of mall when has an irrate wife wait and listed and plus. It seems he has down this attitude before so it took her 3 years to get. Supiciius. .no. No. I find this hilarius how dumb of a wife this girl is. Mabey it's cause she's the styreotipocal white person or mabey not. I don't know but there couldbe been a better exude the what u gave. Maby she had Brain loss. I got even more dumb things about ur story I just ndont feel like writing. And just remember this you arnt a good writer and u never will be so stop with that excuse

GGreat story I would have love to be in your shoes so if you want to say I'm sick then I am,I'm a black male that would have done the same thing.

So how did it work out? It's kind of fucked up how all the cheaters blamed it on the wife. If it works for all of you then more power to you