All Comments on 'Overcome with Jealousy'

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Wonderful. Variety is the spice of life and this was different and very very good. All of us have masochistic tendencies sexual or otherwise and your character portrayed that perfectly. Thanks for the read and write again soon.

Since she was just his girl friend, it make it a stretch to say this a loving wives story. Although the story is well written and a good premise for other stories, which I hope the author will write, it should have been in some other category. The only reason I bring it up, is the fact that I was distracted from the story waiting to see where the loving wife came into the story. Thanks ........Rich

WHAT WAS THAT????

I'm left wondering what happens next, but I almost don't want to know. A beautiful story.

really great pace.