All Comments on 'Overdose'

please please PLEASE write more!

what he said.

And what she said.

That was an awesome set up, and probably one the most fun ideas I've seen for a story in a while, but.. you stopped right as it was getting good! I understand it was meant to be a short one between your other work, but, come on, like two more paragraphs to give it some real payoff wouldn't have killed would it? Still really good though, I look forward to reading more of your work.

p.s. really liked the whole brain invasion thing, hope to see more of that

Please make more!

More, please ♡

This was hot! please wright more! pretty please? With sugar coated black latex demon goo on top

Your story, especially the end, was awesome!

I know you're just doing it as a fill in for Vanara, but damn its hot! 😍

I orgasmed twice while reading it, and again thinking about it afterward! 😘

I especially loved the goo-tongue sliding into Kates ear ;)

Please please write more! 😘

Maybe the demon-goo controlling the other two? Or others? Maybe the parents ;D

This was fabulous, please for the sake of all literature explore this world fruther. I haven't read your other work (as I'm rather new here), but this intermingling of worlds is utterly sublime. Demons and humans frolicking in an almost common manner. As if they've always been together.

The whole language element being a fantastic addition to the story. So few touch on communication and well, community.

Kind regards.

SB

Wanted to apologize for being a dick when I first commented... 8 years ago. I should have said it sooner than this, but honestly it was a shitty way for me to react and I'm sorry. I still think about both this story and Vanara like all the time. They are two of the hottest, most imaginative works of erotic fiction I have read and I absolutely love them. You're amazing Batrachiarch. Even if you never write anything else these stories are a gift and you are awesome.

I am going to write a "remake" of this story and do my best to expand on it. I love it.