All Comments on 'Overdose Ch. 03'

Please tell me you are going to write more!

Why are your chapters so short

An apology isn’t genuine if someone is forcing you to say the words, is it? I mean, think about it. The words are meaningless if that person doesn’t genuinely feel remorseful, as they’re basically reading a script. Other than that, I like the way it’s going in the story! 👌

The apology was irrelevant it was just a reminder that he can control just about anything and everything about her (excl thoughts I would imagine?) if he chooses to. The prospect of being manipulated like a glove puppet is horrifying.

Great chapter.

Tess (UK)