All Comments on 'Overheard'

Great story, so nice to read about normal people.

First, Viagra isn't used to get your dick hard, it's used to keep your dick hard long enough to get the job done. Second, take the time to figure that just because the woman is older than the kid it doesn't automatically become a mature story. Erotic coupling perhaps, but certainly not mature. I didn't read the entire story, it was too erratic and convoluted to enjoy. 8 stories, 17 followers, nothing to brag about. Perhaps you should find a new pastime hobby.

Oh to be fucked by. her time and time again

Your writing seemed more rambling about with, more or less, nonsensical paragraphs of words more for space consumption than bring a reader aling on a descriptive trip. My criticism is from a dual Bachelors in Computer and English Sciences while also pursuing an Educational certification.

Superb story line. A dream come true. I loved this story especially the back ground and build up. I know the grammar and spelling are not perfect but who cares when the story is so stimulating.

The person who stopped reading missed out. This story seemed real to me, and funny ("oh yes, and doing an internship"), and it painted an overweight person not only in a positive light, but a desirable one. Bravo on all fronts. The part where she didn't want to show her belly--vulnerable and realistic. Great to see a woman as human, needy for sex (human) and worried she'd be made fun of or rejected (human). Keep having fun with your writing and please keep making it human for all characters.