All Comments on 'Overheard in a Restaurant'

by MagicaPractica

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very erotic story - well written

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

great writing, really well done

rightbankrightbankalmost 10 years ago
And everyone

goes home with smiling faces.

so much better than a sudoku.

PureRomancePureRomanceover 13 years ago
arousing and hilarious

I was laughing and getting butterflies at the same time it was too funny.... You are an amazing writer...

yakboy69yakboy69over 16 years ago
Very Nice.

Really nice story and very believable. I much prefer realistic stories as opposed to some of the highly unbelievable stories on here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
THERE IS A SAYING

There is a saying that as one door closes another opens.Things were getting a little boring on this site,then you decide to open up the throttles,with amazing submissions like this.Your door is well and truly open,long may it be so.Have you got ants in your pants or something?

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Up and Coming

So will I be keep reading stories like this,also worried about my eyesight.I told you ,you do not have any problems when commenting on your essay on feedback.

naughtyboy2004naughtyboy2004over 16 years ago
nice writing

Thank you for your nice stories.

You are starting to become one of my favorite writers.

From what I can read out of these you must be a verry pasionate writer that puts her soul in it.

There is only one negative part about your stories.........

They are to short. ;-)

I would love to read a much longer story or maybe some sequals.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
SOME MENU

Some menu in this restuarant,where is it?Enjoyable tale.

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