All Comments on 'Overlooked Bride Ch. 05'

by Egmont Grigor

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Nightowl22Nightowl22over 17 years ago
A good tale

and still have grammatical errors. A couple threw me off.

Bianca becomes extremely direct at certain times. I'm thinking she can reel Marty in anytime she wants. Neither seems sure what they want from the relationship, at this point. Sex is agreed on, though. If Bianca decides she wants Marty as more than a boyfriend he doesn't stand a chance, for all his intellectualism.

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