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(A/N: Just wanted to thank everyone for all the comments on the last chapter. That was extremely helpful in knowing I was on the right track with how I was portraying everyone. Special thanks to Kerberos for your very indepth answer, it was very appreciated. And to DSX93, I will neither confirm nor deny that your worry will happen, only that your worry is the intention lol.
But what I did find interesting was how many of you liked the Mara and Laila interplay, which makes me curious to ask another question. Would you all be interested in a short sex scene with just those two? Or would Matt need to be involved for it to be worth it for you?)
- COMMENTS
Jackspeed2uover 1 year agoWhat’s the point? What’s the end goal? What’s the plan? What the Hellhiem is going on? Where is the antagonist? Without another ‘side’ a ‘them’ in us Vs ‘them’ there isn’t really a story. It becomes a soap opera just following their daily lives.
He’s not even studying and expanding his powers except a single sex toy tongue.
Basically this is boring as all fuck and I just skipped the entire useless sex scene with the prude. It’s just pointless. The story and characters are in one place then this chapter happened and everything is just the same. No changes no growth no story advancement.
Just boring as all fuck. If the next chapter is just the goddess getting fucked then I’m out. It’s like a dull stick… pointless.
Anonymousover 3 years agoAs for the pairing, hell yes, why not? They are familiars and they do love each other, I think a pairing just between them would be wonderful. He could be busy with Teri and just tell them to go amuse themselves. I can see a great storyline coming from that idea
Anonymousover 3 years agoI’m I a bit curious story wise how mike as the horseman of death works, Didnt they are alt talk about death’s existence in a precious chapter where they said death was the only other half old one and angel like mike is? And now we have death and then we have mike as the horseman of death, sorry if this question is worded weird. Love the story though, just a bit confused on that point
