All Comments on 'Oversimplification of Amy Ch. 01'

read!

Nice take on an old topic. Easy to read and leaves me wanting more. Thanks.

I liked it. Good lead in, hope we get to see more of this story.

if he was a junior at Uni why were there adult chaperones at the school dance? and in the school gymnasium? that sounds more like high school. nor do I remember bells sounding the end of a class in classrooms beyond the lower levels.

it just seemed a bit out of place for a pre law student.

Looking forward to seeing more.

Since when do they have chaperons in COLLEGE/UNI?

She's a sexy little wench.