All Comments on 'Overwhelmed'

just wish it was more than 1 page through, can't wait for the next one

Please write more, could be a very great story, but i also agree its to short! Add a bit more on your next part!

Thanks y'all! It looked longer in the format I had it, took several edits, I'll try to add to it this weekend if not sooner!!!!

Don't stop now!

Am I in the twilight zone of lesbian sex? The structure and writing of the story is good, just the details of the storyline is "sqeamish." Nana is a trip!

I think this would be best in you put it in the nonconsent category instead of lesbian sex...

I could hardly wait to read your story, once I saw the description, your online name, and the fact that it's written in the first person. I'm very much looking forward to reading your next installment! You GO with this, okay? DEFINITELY give us more!!

Waiting for part 2 and 3

Just stupid, dumb, ugly... awful.

I don't think i want a 70 year old grandma sucking on my tits and pulling my hair. Lol.

sexy, overwhelming more please