All Comments on 'Overwhelmed Pt. 03'

Lol granny is a savage, but its still pretty hot

I thought this story was a little hard to take, not that it is bad, but how many 70 year old woman can do that to a young girl, and why did she agree to stay the night again, and not tell Joe what Nana did, and why did she not lock the bathroom door, but again this is just my opinion

Love when young women are turned by older dykes

Excellent start to story writing. You have real talent.

you ought to continue. be brave. I reckon you are like little lovely girl.

Your writing is very good and story content flows well sticking with the title nicely. Having a 70 year old dominate a much younger woman would be a stretch if you hadn't thrown in the carrot, taking care of the younger girl, i.e. rewards for her submission. So one can accept the age difference and the implied fact that Nana may be an experienced dominating lesbian that has been hidden from notice.

Keep writing as your style is good and most like the story. Also, if the photo in your profile is you, I can only state: Wow very nice indeed!!!

Grandma is a nasty mean bitch but i'm going to keep reading. Lol.

Hi, I wanted to congratulate you on this story. I would not have believed it was your first. The whole story is good but scene 3 is my favourite.

Congratulations

Fantastic. Age differential upping the naughty-meter. The mix of cruelty and arousal is wonderful.

Love it great writing and a mind that enters me