All Comments on 'Overwhelmed--The Return'

ohhh you are comback!!!!! it's my honor to see your work!!!!!

plz wirte more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I was extremely disappointed when I saw this continuation, as it makes a gigantic jump and completely skips progress in the quite interesting developing and unusual relationship between Nana and our heroine, though dialogue and events, for example. Since the story is called , well, Nana, It would have been many chapters before the subject of Nana's take over and reaction and implications from her new slave was abandoned (not to mention the girl has a boyfriend who happens to be related to Nana?). So the result was that this story went into the direction of a quickie sex action story, similar to some Gagged Kitty stories , for example. This is is one reason I suggest not writing in the first person. This allows more depth as you have to point out what the other characters are also thinking. Keep writing.

Yes, Master? I thought she was a woman.

Very sexy and well written series

Very good.

More please!

Orpheum69