All Comments on 'Oxygen Games Ch. 12'

This is the saddest part yet

wrong catagory, needs psych help...........

A beautiful story of a marriage disintegrating. A gorgeous trainwreck. I don't usually like cheating stories, but this one, especially after the buildup of these two broken peoples' stories, hits the right way to make me keep reading almost in spite of myself.

Wow, there’s absolutely no doubt that it’s beautifully written, intense vivid and utterly heartbreaking. Is there anyway back to happy fresh at they’ve done to each other. She saw it as his pride stopping him from calling it off but he was right. They’re both to blame for the situation they’re in because they were stupid and didn’t communicate.

So yeah, bloody brilliant but definitely heartbreaking.

Tess (uk)

So stupid.

She is right he should have saveworded...

But she could have safeworded too...

The only thing that could make this mess even worse is she getting bloody pregnant now they´re breaking up.

Wrong category

I’ve read two of the chapters. You’re obviously a good writer but, wow, you’re wasting your time on a story about totally unlikeable characters. The only good way for this to end would be for them to get hit by a bus. Or grow up.

I couldn't read the actual betrayal, it was too painful. They would be better served to put a gun to each other's head and pull the trigger rather than dragging this out so long.

Why is he even in the bed? If he's in the bed, why would he let her in washed or no? This is terminal. For a person supposedly in love, this is brain dead activity.

He needs to drop her. Needed to do that chapters ago.

I love your writing! I am a 56 year old man and I straight up cried from your stories. I have never commented on anything before, but your work I love that much that I had to send my praise. I am too chicken to read the last page of oxygen games I am crying already for Aiden and Ross! Thank you for these gifts you have given us readers!