All Comments on 'Oz Beach Boy Does Schoolgirl Mia'

by MyBareTorso

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WittonWittonabout 2 years ago

Anytime an author introduces his protagonist by giving him a ten inch cock I expect. the story to be unadulterated stroke i.e., no story at all but just a collection of sexual acts - no plot no tension no reason to waste any more time on it

Your average teenager will love it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Time to put this stupid story to rest. Actually it was after the first few chapters. Oz Beach Boy? Really?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Or maybe just time to stop reading them? I kinda like these silly stories, but they're all pretty much the same, running on the whole big dick trope, so I don't see them changing. If you don't like them now, I can't imagine you ever would...

dwr0242dwr0242about 2 years ago

Please continue this series. I really enjoy them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I like the stories, but just as important the characters’ personalities and the witty dialogue are enjoyable

WittonWittonalmost 2 years ago

I objected to the author's equipping his protagonist with a ten inch cock - I was mistaken - 31 cm = 12 inches

I doubt that many women would be willing to be interested in allowing some guy to push that into them without real precautions - like maybe he's tied down firmly and the woman would lower herself onto him Unlikely - but not so unlikely as our hero having more than 17 or 18 cm

MyBareTorsoMyBareTorsoalmost 2 years agoAuthor

Though obviously not realistic, I love having a recurring character with an outsized, unnatural cock and balls. It's my thing, it gets me off, and I've established the character, so it will definitely continue. Either way, thanks for reading and taking the time to comment.

dingusmcmingusdingusmcmingus8 months ago

The writers consistent use of childish terms like 'peeny' and 'willy' really begins to grate after a while. It really drains the eroticism from these stories.

MyBareTorsoMyBareTorso8 months agoAuthor

Thanks for your comment dingusmcmingus, it's much appreciated. It's only the one character in my stories that uses these kind of flip, silly terms... it's kind of a trait/kink of hers. Sorry it didn't work for you, but thank you for reading and taking the time to comment. 🙏🙋‍♂️

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Based in Sydney, Australia, I am a male who loves lounging on the beach and getting naked for groups of women whenever I can. Though I write across categories, ALL of my stories are CFNM-driven and feature my recurring "Oz Beach Boy" character Matt, a handsome, heavily muscled...