All Comments on 'Paige and Me'

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AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I enjoyed that.

OvercriticalOvercritical6 months ago

It's a little far-fetched, but what the hell. In Fatasyeroticaland anything can happen and it's all aimed at pleasing our thoughts. A little pleasantness to occupy our minds while the world around us goes to hell. 5*

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy6 months ago

A fun story with delightful characters!

5

ArmorlaArmorla6 months ago

Very cheerful and moves along at a good pace, thoroughly enjoyed it.

LovesDancingLovesDancing6 months ago

A fairly simple story but a very good one also.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Cute story, but I get really put off by grammar errors. It's not that hard to do it correctly. As an example, if they had two daughters, one would be the elder and the other the younger, not eldest and youngest. I understand that some people think such errors are of no consequence, but I strongly disagree.

WantingToWriteGoodWantingToWriteGood6 months ago

Now THAT was a nice story. Well done, sir; well done.

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