All Comments on 'Paige-ing Rachel Ch. 01: After the Game'

First time posting, this was really well done! I would love to see this as a series!!

You got simchat Torah right but messed up the length of a soccer match. It’s 90 minutes not 80, even in high school.

Appreciate the attention to detail, Anonymous. I think game length varies by HS league. My high school soccer team played 80 minute games not 90. (I know this because I spent a lot of time as a student watching the girl Rachel is based on play, heh)

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Paige should have told Rachel that she belonged to her now and had to be totally loving &obedient after the 2nd fucking

Great story, I'd love to see more about these 2.

There has to be a part 2 of this at least….please😉

I know this is in the non-consent category, so I have no reason to complain about the rape of Rachel. The rest of the story would have been easier to believe if Paige was a lot more gentle. However, I do like the rest of the story.

It's written well and has me hoping for more.

This was fantastic. Best thing I’ve read, possibly ever

So when's part 2? :)

Incredibly good, hope to read chapter 02 soon!

fantastic work.

Absolutely loved the way you developed the story. Def looking forward to more chapters! :)

Perhaps the best story I’ve read on this site, ever.

Loved It!!! Incredible, So HOTT!!!

the bitch be crazy...

Wow. I agree with the anonymous below: one of the best stories I’ve read. Rachel’s submission felt organic and not tossed off in a few sentences.