All Comments on 'Pain Relief'

Loved the story. The gradual increasing of attention was awesome. This feels more like a real life situation (I hope fpr you it was)

This resembles a situation I had that lasted for many years.

Good story. pretty sexy, actually. I wasn't really going to comment but for a first time writer with a first story I will...

It was difficult to read, and follow along at times, with the incredibly long paragraphs. My suggestion would be to break it up somewhat.

Also, maybe get yourself an editor. I'm sure there are many people on here that would be willing to help.

You've spun a great story here and with some help in could become incredible!

Thanks. I'm giving you 5 stars.

I never had the pleasure to have a massage anything like the one in your story. I guess I just didn't have the correct shop. 5

really good story. Written like it may have truly happened. very good on details and building of story.

This was lovely and expressed the woman's initial hesitation very well.

Loved it. Great story. I agree with the comments of Anonymous that you should get an editor to help you see where you can shorten your story by cutting out unnecessary wording/sentences where you repeat yourself or become a bit long winded in the writing. But it is an excellent story and one that I relate to. Very enjoyable and absorbing. Look forward to your next one.

Great story. More like this please. Love the tease

I could nitpick many areas that needed cleaning up etc but others have already beat me to the punch line: please get an editor. BTW, masseur is a male massage therapist. Masseuse is a female provider.

Just FYI- vagina is internal. The word you were looking for was vulva