All Comments on 'Paint Ch. 01'

It was very well written, please continue.

I really enjoyed this story; it wasn't an unrealistic situation of two strangers giving in to uncontrollable lust, but two friends who have a real affection and attraction for each other. I enjoyed the playfulness between them as well. I hope there's going to be more to this story and Kezzy explores what could be a very interesting relationship with Jake as well.

It was great! I am waiting with baited breath for chapter 2!!

Pleeeeease don't stop.

Please oh please can she wind up with both men at once?

Next chapter yesterday!!!

HOT HOT HOT- cant wait for more!!

When the hell did rape turn into romance?

Loved the foreplay but once Tom decided that getting his rocks off meant he could force Kezzy, I was done.

The story was great! When she was hand cuffed it was even better!

I thought the writing of the sex shop scene was very well done. I enjoyed the innocence and awkwardness of Kezzy with the subtle erotic buildup by the salesman. I think this was the best writing of the piece.