All Comments on 'Paint It Black Ch. 00-01'

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paulthewetcdpaulthewetcdabout 4 years ago
You will be quite happy in my servitude...

An intriguing story.....

Nice bit of tension developing; hopefully, erotic tension!

I am eager to read more about this young motherless slave and his new owner, the beautiful Head Mistress!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Tremendous story and world building with a sense of danger but also heartwarming affection at every turn. Safe to say this is a prime fantasy for a lot of young men and I do hope you will continue to bring it to life!

warelliswarellisalmost 4 years ago
Seems interesting

This looks interesting regarding this setting.

I have one criticism though: I noticed at no point in this that we ever got a clear description of Denise, such as say waht her hair is like.

Is there a reason for that?

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