All Comments on 'Painting Donovan Ch. 04'

Please write more...pretty, pretty please.

love this story! you can't stop now. please carry on.

pretty please

So glad you came back and did more with it!! Hope there is more to follow, too.

I second that motion more more more!!!

moremoremoremore!!!

That was beyond hot and would love to know the outcome of the Ashley drama.

Yes you should do another installment...have the older brother fuck his younger brother's best friend....or something....there's nothing like a bit of betrayal in a hot passionate love story..

Please.

I third that motion more more more more more more more give me more donner donner moi donner moi!!!(which is french for 'give me more')

and for anyone who speaks french i know i might have spelt it wrong so please dont bust a cap in my ass because of it

This series is AMAZING!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!

This series is really good. one suggestion I have is to have Darren do Donovan once just to switch things up.

No way should you stop dude! MOAR!!!!!!!!

Please i am begging you keep on with this! this is too adorable and cute and hot and sexy and just *swoons* keep writing this. I don't know what kind of ending i'd expect but i wanna know more on how they are living their life together!

Hot. Steamy. Sexy. Ravaging. Funny exquisite. Unique. Cum builder. Wow don't u dear stop it there..it looks to me like daddy knows a little bit of what's going on...and hey u changed their eye colour

An incredibly hot series! Thank you for it. I hope you can continue the story without the relationship falling apart - and with the continued high level of great sex between Darren and Don.

Really hot series. Need to write lots more!! And maybe do something with the friend of Darren or have somebody find out? All stories need some conflict. Keep writing!

This is such a great series. You should continue it for many more chapters, right up until they're married and have adopted children of their own. It's so hard to find a gay incest story that you can actually care about, but this is one of them. This whole series gets a perfect five-stars.

As some of you have noticed, I write in fits and starts with chapters taking 4-5 months each. One consequence of this is I forget details like eye colour and time frames. Clearly I'm going to have to go back and re-edit the chapters at some point... In the meantime, enjoy Part 5, it should be up in a week or two. And thanks for the comments. I read every one. If you want a personal response, send me an email.

I just love this story <3

Okay, Ashleys not so cool then. Damn, I was hoping she'd be supporttive but its all cool. Loving the story more.